You have amazing writing, but fix these and it would be perfect. You don't have to put a closing quotation mark at the end of the first paragraph though, as that indicates the speaker is continuing onto the next paragraph.
^Should have a starting quotation on the beginning of the second paragraph. Solaire seeks to find the Sun, but the Sunlight maggot is emphatically not that, so I don't think he'd actually like that outcome very much, despite knowing he'd briefly experience joy at thinking his quest over. His incredible prowess is attributed to training and high-quality equipment, and. Solaire claims to be an adherent of the Lord of Sunlight. His faith is upstanding and unwavering, and all holy symbols on Solaire's belongings were painted by himself. Solaire is a Warrior of Sunlight who is determined to find 'his very own sun'. She does not only hold power because she has always been royalty, but because she is essentially the strongest being in Equestria." One way to consider your question is how Solaire himself would judge each outcome, based on what we know of him. Solaire of Astora is a character of the video game Dark Souls. While there are Earth ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns (like me), Princess Celestia bears the power of all three of our races.
A terrible fight and surge of evil from her sister had forced herself to banish Luna from Equestria up until recently. At one point, a conflict arose between Celestia and her sister, Luna. Executioner Drawing Png Transparent - Dark Souls 2 Dukes Dear Freja Art 10670. She has been around longer than anypony could remember. Solaire Of Astora Praise The Sun Dark Soul Shirts - Dark Souls - Praise. "In the beginning there were two regal sisters who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. Kill all 9 bugs and talk to solaire so he can show up for the final boss battle. The door is right before the fire sage demon with a root going down towards it. If he isnt take the shortcut from the chaos covenant you need to give 30 humanity to open it. If, however, they have a lot to say and you want to separate their speech into paragraphs, you still have to use quotation marks to begin the next paragraph of speech (though, in doing this, you don't have to use closing quotation marks to end the previous paragraph's dialogue). See if he is at the sunlight altar if he is talk to him there. You still have the problem of incorrectly using "your" and "you're", as well as "it's" and "its." Also, when someone talks, you should keep their whole dialogue to a single paragraph. my weary eyelids gently steep, be my last thought- how sweet to rest. Awesome! Can't wait until Solaire meets Celestia. 1 Sun of my soul, Thou Savior dear, it is not night if Thou be near O, may no earthborn cloud arise, to hide Thee from Thy servant's eyes.
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